short story 

for the first time.

need an advice...!!!!!

I have started my way to kill time by writing a short story 

still confused how i  shall post it?

chapter by chapter or all in a row?

shall i wait for the response for the first chapter and then begin the next one? (it might save some time, if the story was rejected by audience , i won't have to start the next chapter, it might feel little bad, but hey..! I've been through worst)

I am totally confused about these few points. i need some expert advice on that topic. its my first time over this thing, will it appeal to my followers or won't?

the title i chose is

"I love she, she love he,

he love her, god helps me"